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An Invisible Angel by ~onelife2live:icononelife2live:



A little girl,
Sat in her room,
Waiting for the phone,
To ring.
But it never did.

The next day,
Her heart now broken,
She walks past her dream,
But she is invisible to him.

At lunch,
When she sits all alone,
Him and his friends,
And the rest of the class,
Walks right past her,
Without a second glance.

That little girl tries,
But she knows all she'll ever be,
Is invisible to the school, the people, the world.
An invisible angel hidden in the sea.
©2007-2010 ~onelife2live
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Author's Comments

Yea, I know this isn't a good one, but I wrote it a really long time ago...

Don't let people be invisible angels, if you see one, go up to them and talk to them...maybe all they ever needed was a friend...

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:iconosruigrl4evr:
omg thats not bad at all! its really good!

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Back when we didn't care if we were accepted...
Back when we didn't judge each other for no reason...
Back when boys had cooties...
Back when everything you did was cute...
Back when everyone was your friend...

That's where I'd like to be.
:icondarkshadowrage:
beautiful o.o

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:iconmattiello:
This is very good. You're quite right. That's what I usually do. :) On line fourteen, is that supposed to be her, instead of "him"? Inless I'm confused, of course.

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:icononelife2live:
thank u so much

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Anyone can give up. It's the EASIEST thing in the world to do. But, to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart...That's true strength
:icononelife2live:
no you are not confsued, in fact you are quite correct, i try to switch the genders every once in a while so its not all girl stuff, so guys can relate to it to and stuff, and this poem was originally with a guy instead of a girl...but this is how i am feeling quite recently so i switched it to relate to me...thank you for pointing that out, i will fix it

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Anyone can give up. It's the EASIEST thing in the world to do. But, to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart...That's true strength
:icondarkshadowrage:
Your welcome! ^_^

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Beautiful!

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I would like that, You have improved alot.
When did you write this one?

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November 12, 2007
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